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张之久，中学特级教师，河南省郑州市人。教学能手。教学中自创一种愉快学习法，能把枯燥的学习与轻松的阅读联系在一起，效果显著。
长期担任高中英语教学工作。主编教学专著二十余本，参与或主持各级教研课题七项，被誉为“专家型教师”、“研究型教师”。
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插图：Introducing Somebody ■标签：话题中的故事Although Princeton, New Jersey, has a world-famous university, it is still a small quiet town. It is not a place where anyone would expect to see strange characters on the street. That is why one woman will never forget the day in 1940 when, as a child, she suddenly saw a funny-looking man coming towards her. “I remember,” she tells her children now, “how wild his white hair looked—as if it had been electrified. He was short. His clothes seemed to be just pulled on to keep him covered, like a blanket to keep one warm. He had a big nose, a short, thick moustache, and deep-set eyes. He was staring, thinking. He almost knocked me down before he saw me. He gave me a friendly smile, then he walked on and went on thinking. I noticed he had been on bedroom slippers. He had forgotten to put on his shoes. He looked as if he had just stepped out of my book of fairy tales and had passed me like a spirit. That night at dinner when I told my family about the strange, funny man I had seen, my father put down his knife and fork, looked at me and said,“My child, remember this. Today you saw the greatest man in the world!”That man was Elbert Einstein. How and why he had come to Princeton, New Jersey is a story of struggle, success, and sadness.曾经诵记过不少老高中教材的英文片段，这是留下非常深刻记忆的其中一段。想想看，应该有两个原因：一是当时的教材中的确缺少这样描写人物的材料，二是这一段的确写得很精彩，以至于每每看到爱因斯坦的画像时总想起这段描写，而背读起这段文字时眼前又总是浮现出爱因斯坦的形象。这或许就是我们常常说到的“形象生动”、“栩栩如生”吧。文段边忆边叙，为我们刻画了一位大鼻深眼、短须乱发、衣着随意、不修边幅的人物形象，而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的爱因斯坦，也难怪He was staring, thinking。■ 标签：推荐背诵范文ABill GatesBill Gates grew up in Seattle, Washington. When he was very young, he was good at science and maths, and he said he wanted to be a scientist.Bill started to play with computers at the age of 13. At that time, computers were very large machines. Once he was interested in a very old computer. He and some of his friends spent a lot of time doing unusual things with it. In the end, they worked out a software program with the old machine. Bill sold it for 4,200 dollars in 1972 when he was only 17.In 1973, Bill went to Harvard University. He developed the BASIC language for the first microcomputer. In the third year, he left the university and worked for a company called Microsoft. He began his company in 1975 with his friend Paul Allen. They thought that the computer would be a very important tool in every office and every home, so they began developing software for personal computers. They developed the software to make it easier for people to use computers. In 1999, Bill wrote a book. In the book, he told people how computer technology could solve business problems in new ways. It was one of the best-sellers on the New York Times list.Bill has many hobbies. He enjoys reading very much. He also enjoys playing golf and bridge.BNapoleon and BeethovenAnybody who hears the word “hero” will probably think of the name Napoleon. But what name would come to your mind if you heard the words “the Hero of Music”? Well, Beethoven, of course.Napoleon was born in 1769, and Beethoven the following year. These two great masters played active roles in their different fields during much the same period of time. Even though Beethoven was seldom surprised by developments, he must have been astonished to hear of Napoleon?謘s rapid rise to power after the French Revolution.In 1798, Napoleon set off for Egypt. In the same year, Beethoven met Jean Berbadotte, Napoleon?謘s officer, who had been appointed French Ambassador to Vienna, where Beethoven lived. Bernadotte was a great lover of music, and suggested that Beethoven compose a symphony for the hero, Napoleon, as its model. Beethoven took the suggestion and began work on the symphony. When he completed the piece, he wrote “Bonaparte” on the cover of the score, indicating that he was the person to whom it was dedicated.But soon the news reached Vienna that Napoleon had become emperor. When Beethoven heard this, he cried out: “He is just another man of the world, no different from anyone else. He will take away the rights of all people and live just for his own vanity and ambition. Before long, he will no doubt become a tyrant.” Beethoven was so angry at Bonaparte?謘s imperial title that he changed the name of the symphony to “Sinfonia Eroica”, —“Heroic Symphony” in Italian—and added the words “composed in memory of a great man”. In 1821, when Beethoven learned of Napoleon?謘s death on the island of St. Helena, he said, “I wrote about this tragedy in my music 17 years ago.”CA Lucky ThingAbout sixty years ago, a child named Borty was playing one day with a group of naughty boys. When they were playing happily, an accident happened. An elder child picked up Borty and threw him into the sky. When Borty fell down, the big child did not catch him but rather let him fall on the ground. As a result, Borty?謘s leg broke.He had to wear heavy plaster while lying in bed for several months. The worst thing was that his leg bone did not heal. It was a terrible thing to a little child. Little Borty screamed in pain and fear.This was a tragedy, but now Borty had a few ideas that he was now one of the best writers in the world. Maybe you are not familiar with the name Borty, but when I mentioned the name Wells, you must know it. Maybe you have read some books of his. He wrote more than 75 books. Wells thought that breaking his leg was a lucky thing for him. It made him stay at home for one year. In that year he read many books, because he had nothing to do except that. It made him very interested in literature. He became enlightened by these books. So his staying home was a turning point for him. Later he became the writer in the world whose income was the highest.DMy Beloved TeacherMr. Li is one of my beloved teachers. He taught us physics when we were in Senior 1. He was old, but he taught very well. He could make his classes lively and interesting. Mr. Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct and do it again. I used to be poor in physics. Mr. Li often helped me with my lessons very patiently. Thanks to his help and hard work, I have made good progress and caught up with the class. As a retired teacher, he?謘s still working hard for our educational cause(教育事业).高考链接（3）博主猜题（2）评论（610）阅读（233588）后一篇：Describing a Place■高考链接 2008•湖南请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120个词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息做适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：对该人物的简单介绍； 喜欢该人物的理由； 从该人物身上得到的启示。Three possible versions:AThomas EdisonBorn in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination. I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his childhood, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Meio Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions. What impresses me most is his famous saying, “genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. BHelen KellerEvery time I read “... if I had the power of sight for three days”, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman. I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sulliven, Helen learned to read and write, and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder.Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.CWilliam ShakespeareDo you know Hamlet? Have you read the Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!Since “life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well. 2007•湖南假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述；3. 对李华表示美好的的祝愿。　 注意：1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整；2. 不能写成诗歌形式，不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数120个左右。One Possible Version:Li Hua, It?謘s time to say goodbye. It?謘s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!Yours,Wang Ping 2005•山东假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。1. 表示感兴趣；2. 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；3. 希望得到回复。注意：1. 词数100个左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。one possible version:Dear Sir or Madam, I?謘m a student from Xinhua Middle School. I?謘m glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. I?謘m quite interested in it.I think I?謘m fit for the job. As a student, I?謘ve read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. I?謘m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I?謘m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I?謘m sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I?謘m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua■ 博主猜题（一） 三月份到了，你校校刊请你写一篇短文，简要介绍雷锋的生平事迹。请你根据下面所给的材料，写出100个词左右的短文，叙述雷锋短暂的一生，即给雷锋同志写一份简历。履历表 童年： 失去父母及兄弟姐妹，孤儿；1949年： 家乡解放后有机会去上学，在校勤奋学习；1962年： 因公去世；业绩： 热爱党，热爱社会主义，严于律己，乐于助人；毛主席题词： 向雷锋同志学习；参考词汇： die at one?謘s post， 因公殉职/去世。One Possible Version: Lei Feng?謘s Short LifeComrade Lei Feng was born in Changsha in 1940, a city in South China. He was from a very poor peasant?謘s family. When he was a little boy, his parents, sister and brother were all dead, so he became an orphan.Only after his hometown was liberated in 1949, did he have a chance to go to school. He studied and worked very hard, so he became a League member in 1959.In the spring of 1960, Lei Feng joined the PLA. He was always ready to help others. In November, 1960, he joined the Chinese Communist Party. He was strict with himself. He always thought of others first, but never himself. Lei Feng died at his post in 1962. He was only 22 at that time.In honour of him, Chairman Mao called the whole nation to learn from him. （二）请根据以下提示，用英语给《中国日报》写一篇100个词左右的简讯，要求内容连贯，语句准确，并包含如下要点：1. 姓名： 刘进，年龄39岁，上海一家工厂的工程师；2. 1978年毕业于南京大学，后来留学日本东京大学，攻读化学工程；3. 1982年科研成果显著，获博士学位；4. 日本一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但他拒绝了；5. 为了报效祖国，他于1983年毅然回国。One Possible Version: Mr. Liu Jin, aged 39, is working in a factory in Shanghai as a chemical engineer. After he graduated from Nanjing University in 1978, he was sent to Tokyo University to study the chemical engineering. Through his hard work for 4 years, he achieved remarkable result in scientific research and received a doctor?謘s degree in 1982. A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promised to give him a good salary but he didn?謘t accept it. In 1983 he returned to China without any hesitation. He has made up his mind to devote all his life to our country. ■ 高考进行时高考写作考什么——近年高考书面表达体裁、题材以及命题形式分类统计2008年高考试题写作考查一览表 Describing a Place ■（102）朵 ■ （0）坨■标签：话题中的故事 Santa Fe, the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A., is in the central part of the state, on the Santa Fe River, which flows into the Rio Grande 35 kilometers west of the city. More than two thousand meters above sea level, it lies in the Sangre de Cristo Mountains with the Ortiz Mountains to the southeast. Santa Fe was founded in 1609 by the Spanish on an old Indian village. In 1680 the Indians seized the place but only held it for twelve years before the Spanish retook it. The city remained under Spanish rule until Mexico won its independence in 1821. From then on it was a Mexican city until 1846 when it was taken over by U.S.A. troops. With a population of 48,953, Santa Fe is now the second largest city in the state. Because of its sunny weather, rich history and surrounding mountains, it is a good place for holiday makers. Besides hunting and skating in the mountains people enjoy shopping in the Indian and Spanish shops, which brings a large income to the city every year. In summer there is an international opera season when operas are shown in a partly-roofed, open air theatre daily for people from all over the world. 本篇文段选自1993年高考阅读理解部分。全文仅用205个单词就向读者清晰地描画了Santa Fe这个地方的地理位置、人口状况、资源特色，特别是用较大篇幅叙述了此处的历史变迁等地方特征。全文有详有略，重点突出。 文中追溯历史的片段（划线部分）尤其值得借鉴；学习时请注意其中表示时间的连词、介词，几个动词的用法以及主动、被动时态交互应用的特色。 另外，同位语the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A.,介词结构With a population of, Because of, besides等的使用也使文段显得紧凑、连贯。■标签：推荐背诵范文AThe United States of America The United States of America is one of the most developed countries in the world. It lies between two great oceans, the Atlantic to the east and the Pacific to the west. Its neighbor countries are Canada on the north and Mexico on the south. Washington is its capital while the east coast city—New York is its biggest city, which is also known as the “Big Apple”, where the United Nations?謘 building stands. The United States is made up of 50 states, which covers over nine million three hundred and sixty thousand square kilometers and has a population of about two hundred and thirty millions, most of which are workers. The earliest inhabitants in the United States are Indians. As the United States of America is a immigrant country, people often call it a “ Melting Pot”.BA Visit to a High School Yesterday I paid a visit to a model high school, together with my friend. It?謘s very big with a beautiful fountain in the center of the schoolyard. We started our visit from the main building. First we went to the lab building where some students were doing experiments. Then we entered the lecture hall behind the lab building and saw many students listening to a lecture given by a professor. Opposite to the lecture hall was the art center. There we watched groups of students playing musical instruments. Finally we arrived at the playground at the far back of the school. Some boys were having a football game, which was so exciting that we couldn?謘t help cheering for them. It was really an impressive visit.CMy Hometown My hometown lies on the Plain of North China. The famous Grand Canal of China① is to the east of our village. This is the place where my forefathers ② have lived for generations. When I was a boy I often played with other children near the bank of the canal. I watched the passing boats, and I wished to travel all over the world. There are about 800 people in our village. A pond, teeming with ③fish, lies in front of the village. I used to swim there in summer and skate in winter. It was in this pond that I spent the happiest days of my childhood. To the north of our village are great fields. When spring comes, the crops begin to grow, turning the fields green. When crops turn yellow in autumn, the peasants start to harvest them. Between the canal and our village is an orchard. There were only a few kinds of fruit trees years ago, but now the peasants grow many sorts, including peach, plum, apple and orange. The majority of the villagers have become much better off. About a quarter of the households have bought television sets and tape recorders. A reading-room and a library have been built. Every evening many young people go to the evening school to learn science and read newspapers. Two roads cross in front of our village. On summer evenings, people sit under the trees enjoying the cool breeze④. The houses in our village are well laid out. By the end of last year, 35 students in our village had graduated from senior middle school, and 12 students were enrolled ⑤ at colleges. This is my hometown. I hope you will make a visit here one day. 词语解释： ①the Grand Canal of China 中国大运河 ②forefather n. （常用复数）祖先；前人 ③teem with 充满；富于 ④breeze n. 微风 ⑤enroll v. 招收；使入学DDear Mamma, How are you and Papa? I arrived here last Friday safely, only the journey was mot very pleasant, the train was crowded and dirty, and I was terribly tired when I got here. But now I?謘m quite OK again. Uncle?謘s family are all very well. They were very happy to see me and are all kind to me. Cousin Wei Ping is really warm-hearted, and he has been showing me around the city these days. Tonight Wei Ping and I are going to a concert, I?謘m sure we?謘ll have a good time. Guangzhou is a beautiful city, and a bustling one as well. Life here is busy, exciting and colourful. I love the way people work and live here and I hope to have a chance to work and live in this city when I grow up. Uncle and Aunt send you their love. Love, Ming高考链接（3） 博主猜题（3） 评论（646） 阅读（544521）前一篇：Introducing Somebody后一篇：Describing Something That Happened ■ 高考链接 2009•全国II假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 2.位置：天安门广场南面； 3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street当当车 trolley car地铁 subway注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。One Possible Version:Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian anmen Square, it's very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to the theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I'm sure you'll like it. Yours,Li Hu 2007•全国卷II 一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括： 1. 地点： 距白山入口处500米； 2. 房间及价格：单人间（共20间）； 3. 100元／天；双人间（共15间）； 4. 150元／天；热水淋浴； 5. 餐饮： 餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）； 6. 游泳池： 全天免费开放； 7. 欢迎预定。 注意： 1． 词数100个左右，开头语已为你写好； 2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。One Possible Version:Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge. All are welcome! 2006•四川 假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick 将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。 注意： 1. 词数100个左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇： province省份, lake海子,Dujiangyan Irrigation Project都江堰水利工程。One Possible Version：Dear Nick, I?謘m glad to hear that you?謘re coming to Sichuan in August. You?謘ve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors?謘 imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I?謘m sure you?謘ll have a good time. I?謘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua ■ 博主猜题（一） 假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane准备暑假来你校参观，想请你介绍一下学校情况。下面是你校的基本信息，请根据以下内容给Jane回一封信，并表示欢迎她来参观。 学校名称：广东第三中学； 地理位置：在离大海约15公里的一个小镇上； 学校历史：是有80多年历史的老学校； 师生人数：有老师200多人，学生3000多人，（高中学段）； 校园环境：占地近15万平方米，学校很美，有花草，大树，三座教学大楼，6座宿舍楼； 学习课程：有中文、数学、科学、英语、计算机、体育、美术等。 写作要求： 1. 必须包括以上全部内容； 2. 只能使用5个句子。 参考词汇： dormitory building宿舍楼One Possible Version: Dear Jane, I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle school. It lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea and it has a history of over 80 years. Our school, covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior students. It has three teaching buildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all around, so it?謘s very beautiful. In our school we learn Chinese, maths, science, English, computer, PE, arts and some other subjects. We warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （二） 李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔，因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语，陈小明来信询问学校情况，以下是李华回信的内容。 1. 听说你明年来我校学习，我们很高兴; 2. 我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校; 3. 学校很美，有许多花草树木，两座教学大楼，一座宿舍楼; 4. 学校设备优良，有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等，学生除正式课程外，还有许多选修课，如：油画、打字、烹调等; 5. 最重要的是，学校有许多优秀教师，课程有趣，老师既有知识又和蔼，非常愿意帮助我们，我爱我们的学校，我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。 参考词汇：elective选修课， gym体育馆， dormitory building宿舍楼One Possible Version:Dear Xiao Ming, I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school. Now let me tell you something about our school. Our school campus is beautiful. It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass. We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building. In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library. There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking. Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school. Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students. I like our school. I hope you will like our school too. Yours, Li Hua（三） 请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100~120个词的短文。 提纲： 1. 家乡的地理位置（在一条宽阔的河边/鱼米之乡）； 2. 解放前的情况（贫困落后的小村/人们没工作/生活很艰苦）； 3. 解放后的变化（1949年以后，发生极大变化：街道宽敞了，工厂、学校、医院、电影院、戏院建起来）； 4. 对家乡的感情。One Possible Version:My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it much richer and more beautiful.■ 高考进行时高考写作为什么这么考？ 一、《课程标准》对“写”的要求： 分级要求 六级标准 1． 能用恰当的格式写便条和简单的信函； 2． 能简单地描述人物或事件，并简单地表达自己的意见； 3． 能用恰当的语言书写问候卡； 4． 能给朋友、笔友写信，交流信息和情感； 5． 能对所写内容进行修改。 七级标准 1． 能用文字及图表提供信息并进行简单描述； 2． 能写出常见体裁的应用文，例如：信函和一般通知等； 3． 能描述人物或事件，并进行简单的评论； 4． 能填写有关个人情况的表格，例如：申请表等； 5． 能以小组形式根据课文改编短剧。 八级标准 1． 能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要； 2． 能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告； 3． 能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度； 4． 能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。 九级标准 1． 能用英文书写摘要、报告、通知和公务信函等； 2． 能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度或感情； 3． 能阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点，文体恰当，用词准确； 4． 能在写作中恰当地处理引用的资料及他人的原话； 5． 能填写各种表格，写个人简历和申请书，用语基本正确、得当； 6． 能做简单的笔头翻译； 7． 能在以上写作过程中做到文字通顺，格式正确。 这几个层次等级指标，大体对应与高中各个年级段，而九级目标则是针对高考而言的标准。同时，对于“写作技能教学”，《课程标准》又提出了如下教学目的和技能目标： 4. 写作技能的教学 教学目的：表述事实、观点、情感、想象力，交流信息，培养规范的写作习惯。 基本技能：整理思路； 　　　　　　　组织素材； 　　　　　　　规划文章结构； 　　　　　　　列出提纲； 　　　　　　　起草文章； 　　　　　　　组织语言； 　　　　　　　遣词造句； 　　　　　　　修改文章； 　　　　　　　正确使用标点符号和字母大小写。 主要教学活动举例： 写前活动 激活灵感； 激发兴趣； 明确目的和读者对象； 讨论主题； 搜集素材； 语言准备； 阅读范文； 写提纲。 写时活动 写初稿； 规划文章结构； 填空； 看图作文； 图文转换； 仿写； 连句成文。 写后活动 自我修改； 相互修改； 个人或小组面批； 检查语言、文法、逻辑、用词、润色； 制作板报，墙报。《高考英语考试大纲》对“写”的要求 3． 写作 要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能： (1) 准确使用语法和词汇； (2) 使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。 三、国家教育部考试中心颁布的《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试说明》中对“写作”的要求是： 能根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文；情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。 由以上《标准》和《大纲》《说明》要求可知，英语写作是一个综合性的题目，要求考生根据所给的图画、图表、提纲等，应用所学的知识将所提供的信息组成句子，句子连成段落，段落连成文章。它不但要求考生有丰富的语言知识、语法知识，而且要有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。写作也是一种融形式、文体、交际于一体的试题，所考查的内容都体现在表达和传递信息的能力上，因此它还有交流性、实用性及合理性等特点。它通常对考生有三个方面的限定： 首先，表现在时间和词数的限制上，即一般要求考生在30分钟内写出100个词左右（现在有略微增加的趋势，如山东卷等增加到了120至150个词）的短文；其次，表现在情景内容的限制上，情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容、结果等方面，提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、叙述等，这些是写作的基本依据；第三，表现在所用体裁和格式的限定上，它的体裁包括记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文（书信、日记、通知等）。另外，它所涉及的英语知识均限定在考生中学阶段所掌握的语言知识范围之内。■评论眼巴巴的跑来占位子先，后面的排队排队，表挤！！ 发布者：如意牡丹1楼 IP地址：106.254.21 《再别康桥》真的很美哎！我喜欢。英文译得也很棒哦！读起来有感觉！O_O 发布者：兰陵王2楼 IP地址：58.354.23 那是，也不看是谁写的。那可是我家摩摩，我是他的忠实摩菇。我家小摩摩，咿呀伊尔吆~~ 发布者：水莲花3楼 IP地址：221.35.20 狂晕，我滴亲娘哎~~雷死我了。：（ 发布者：步惊云4楼 IP地址：68.54.32 “康桥”—Cambridge？Cambridge—康桥！原来是这样来得啊！谢谢博主推荐！ 发布者：李小帅5楼 IP地址：222.36.54 读着这一话题，真的有如“话题素材”所言：It is a feast for the mind as well as the eyes! 发布者：黑蚂蚁6楼 IP地址：54.35.21 顶，这么好的东西，无条件支持！ 发布者：岩石7楼 IP地址：32.25.45 期待下一篇，继续关注。 发布者：如意牡丹8楼 IP地址：106.254.21 看了这个作文博客，觉得我的英语更有希望了。这么清晰的讲述，看这一个博客，就等于看了好多本资料书了。真划算！ 发布者：岩石9楼 IP地址：32.25.45 相当同意楼上的兄弟，我也这么觉得呢。 发布者：李小帅10楼 IP地址：222.36.54 ……

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英语作文看这本就OK PDF格式下载

很不错的一本书,内容很适合我,
有范文,有常用的短语,
教人怎样更好地写英语作文.
赞一个~

书配图，精解，字较小，内容很多，符合现在的高中生眼光。非常有用又好看的书。我本人31岁，文职工作，英语是个人爱好，也收藏了一本，提高一下基本美文的写作水平。

我个人以为，职场用到的英文，不比此书提到的难。本书适用英语爱好者进行书面写作，如日记等练笔。

论学生主题作文，本书是炉火纯青。

英语作文，却实看这本就OK

对孩子英语作文提高不少

高中生写英语小短文的良师益友。

这本书真的很有用，而且没有多少说教，看起来很舒服，就是边栏的子有点小，买了这本，就不需要再买任何有关作文的书了

这本书以博客的形式来写，很吸引人，就像看故事书一样，让人不想放下。很幽默，好书好书好书！！！！

书很好，涵盖很广

很多的作文短语，非常有用

不过，学生应该从高一就开始学习这本书，高三再看，恐怕迟了。

形式还是很新颖的
采用了博客的形式
但是内容不是很好
只有作文
没有讲解

没我想象中好，不过有分类 还是不错的

我家位置还不错，靠市中心不远，旁边还有汽车城这个城市坐标，快递人员一会说不认识一会说车没电，打电话叫我骑车几十分钟去拿，还说随你要不要，不来反正也不送，大不了再退回去。。。。。。。。。。

看起来挺不错

这本书一点都不好，内容很凌乱，没有条理似的

虽然便宜，但内容超**，基本没什么作用

作文挺好的，只是现在用可能帮助不大

很好很详细，很适合高中学生总复习